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There's such a sad love
Deep in your eyes, a kind of pale jewel
Open and closed within your eyes
I'll place the sky within your eyes

There's such a fooled heart
Beating so fast in search of new dreams
A love that will last within your heart
I'll place the moon within your heart

As the pain sweeps through
Makes no sense for you
Every thrill has gone
Wasn't too much fun at all
But I'll be there for you-oo-oo
As the world falls down

Falling
(As the world) Falling down
Falling in love

I'll paint you mornings of gold
I'll spin you Valentine evenings
Though we're strangers till now
We're choosing the path between the stars
I'll leave my love between the stars

As the pain sweeps through
Makes no sense for you
Every thrill has gone
Wasn't too much fun at all
But I'll be there for you-oo-oo
As the world falls down


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In other news, ILMB still can't draw backgrounds to save her life. Hooray!~


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Labyrinth © Jim Henson
As The World Falls Down lyrics © Davie "Liquid Sex" Bowie

Critiques


:iconloqutor:
I agree with the other critic in that the simplicity of the background is good for this picture, and I will reiterate the point about the shading.

I really like how her eyes came out, and her legs are quite nice.

Now, a few problems that I noticed. First, the curtains: instead of being reflected by the surface she's standing on, they seem to continue beyond it, as if the surface weren't there. Her right jaw seems to be straighter than the left jaw. As nicely-detailed as her hair is, it seems to be blown in one direction, while her dress and jewelry remain unaffected. What bothers me the most, though, is the size of her head. It seems way too large for her body. Other than that, good job, ILMB.
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:iconmidnightwatcher12:
I think the simplicity of the background compliments the complexity of the dress. A complicated or fancy background would distract from the focus.

The main I'd suggest an improvement on is the shading. It does quite fit with the position of the light source. Light sources from above are...in blunt terms: insanely hard to do. The lighting is great, but the shading isn't quite where it should be. (Except for on her hands, awesome job on those. ^^) The shadow under her shouldn't be from her legs, it should actually be from her skirt.

All in all, this is a very beautiful and well done piece. Plus, Labyrinth is somewhere beyond the land of awesome and well into the realm of 'best thing ever.' Well titled, too. Bowie is amazing. It'd be awesome to see a companion to this with Jareth. (*drool*) This picture is certainly is one of the more original pieces of Labyrinth fan art out there, and has a certain Phantom of the Oprea-eque feel to it.
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:iconneoshayna888:
=D Labyrinth!

Nice work! :)

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"(You learned your lesson)
Come back to me, it's almost easy
(But still you fall)
Come back again, it's almost easy"

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:iconmaya-kitajima:
Since I'm too lazy to use the critique button and write a lot, I'll just say that her figure seems to shrink. :/

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"... Oh my god, where?"

Will draw for Gaia gold!

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:iconyami-luna:
AAAHHHHHH LABYRINTH REFERENCE!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!! :iconjoyplz: OOHH what if you did misaki and trea as sarah and jareth? XD That would be cool. And awesome work on this pic. :icongreatjobplz:
:icono0star720o:
It's nice :)
but the head is too big
:iconilovemybishies87:
Thank you. :)

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Life makes us realize there is nothing in the world truly perfect. But through that imperfection, we can find beauty.

Crack shipping means never having to give a reason. :heart:

Crack pairings are all about possibilities, not inevitabilities.
:iconneoshayna888:
:3

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"(You learned your lesson)
Come back to me, it's almost easy
(But still you fall)
Come back again, it's almost easy"

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:iconilovemybishies87:
Can you elaborate? When you say "shrink" do you mean from head to toe or...?

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Life makes us realize there is nothing in the world truly perfect. But through that imperfection, we can find beauty.

Crack shipping means never having to give a reason. :heart:

Crack pairings are all about possibilities, not inevitabilities.
:iconilovemybishies87:
That is very tempting, now that you mention it.

Thank you. :)

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Life makes us realize there is nothing in the world truly perfect. But through that imperfection, we can find beauty.

Crack shipping means never having to give a reason. :heart:

Crack pairings are all about possibilities, not inevitabilities.
:icondemonicangel67:
Hm. Now, I can't really critique much as my drawings are absolutely horrid, but I must agree with what others are saying. She seems to shrink going from top to bottom.
Other than that, it looks nice~! :D

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-Is Currently In Love With Ulquiorra-
“Keep your friends close, your lover close by...and your enemies closest of all.”
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I LOVE YOU DEIDARA-SAMA, JIRAIYA-SAMA, AND ITACHI-SAMA! R.I.P
:iconakwardreversal:
CON CRIT WARNING!!!! (I lack a subscription so I cant use the crit button OTL)

The blush on her cheeks is so stunning! It gives her a real belle-of-the-ball look. I have to say though, her eyes and her head are a tad bit big, and her eyebrows are a bit thick. I LOVE her clothes (the shading, the colors, everything! the clothes and background just look so beautiful im speachless!) and shoulders though, and her skin looks so dewy and soft! Keep up the good work!

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"I'm like a Weeble. I wobble but I don't fall down. I think we should all aspire to be Weebles."~*AkiraEA
"I write to be a different person, because its a life I'm in full control over ~Myself, Crystal Bugner

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